独立写作满分范文

到底什么样的作文才能拿满分？

满分作文一般写多少字？

满分作文要写几段？

满分作文都用啥结构？

满分作文必须得用很多复杂的句式吗？

满分作文可以偶尔有错误吗？

上面这些问题应该是考生们在备考托福写作的时候最关心的问题。而且，上述问题也是我们在大量的投入时间练习之前必须要搞清楚的问题。

但是实际上由于大部分老师其实都没考过几次试，而且每个老师能考到写作满分的学生并不多，所以真正的写作满分范文特别难收集。市面上所谓的满分范文大部分质量很差，根本不是真正考试中拿过满分的文章。花大量的时间研究那些文章很有可能会让我们对于托福写作的要求产生误解，既浪费钱，也耽误了时间。

为了帮助大家更好的了解托福独立写作的评分标准，从而搞清楚自己努力的方向，考试先生为大家精心整理了2022年最新的30篇独立写作满分范文并且对相关的数据做了简单的分析。

• 满分范文要写多少词？

上图显示，满分范文对于词数并没有固定的要求，400多一点儿其实就可以拿到满分，想多写一些600多字也可以。但是比较主流的就是500-550词。这是一个比较舒适的范围。我们既不会因为词数少而感到心虚，也不会因为要写太多而感到压力很大。

• 满分范文要写几段？

可能很多同学和老师觉得让步段是很有必要的，或者有些人一直觉得必须要写3个理由，但是这30篇满分范文大部分都是四段。这就说明不一定非得写让步，也不一定卡死三个理由。

• 满分范文要写多少句？

总的词数和段数定下来之后，紧接着我们就来看一下总的句子数以及平均每个句子的单词数。从上图我们可以看出，样本的30篇范文当中，句子数的中位数是23，所以我们自己在写的时候如果不知道写多少句的话可以写25句左右。

• 满分范文句子要写多长？

当然，上面提到的25句不可能每个都是复杂句，但是根据下图我们可以看到，我们最好能够做到简单句和复杂句结合，保证每个句子的词数平均在20-25词。否则，很有可能没有办法满足句子多样性的要求。

• 30篇满分范文都包括了哪些话题和题型？

为了增加这些范文的参考价值，我在挑选的时候尽量涵盖了不同的话题以及所有的题型。如果我们能够认真的学习这30篇范文的话，我们不仅可以积累不同话题的大量的写作素材和句式，也可以学习不同的题型的写法。比如，很多同学不知道三选一的题目怎们写最好。我相信看了这30篇文章之后这些问题都会迎刃而解。

• 30篇满分范文都涵盖了哪些写法？

为了增加这30篇范文的学习价值，多种写法的文章大家都会遇到。有一些写法可能我们平时自己很少用到或者不敢去用，但是实践表明，它们确实也可以帮我们拿到满分，所以大家不妨学习一下，毕竟多一个选择也不是坏事儿。

分因素讨论

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? You should make sure that others (for example, influential people or potential employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments; if you do not do this, you will never be successful in life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 2022-11-01

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这个题是我遇到的特别难写的题目之一，很多同学看到题目可能直接就蒙了。大部分考生只能顺利的想到一个理由，第二个可能就开始胡编了。但是，我们可以尝试满分范文中给出的写法，主题句如下：

First, we need to consider the culture of the organization we work for.

Second, we also need to take into account the size of the organization.

也就是说我们可以从一个组织的文化（有的组织可能比较反感毛遂自荐，有的反而会比较喜欢）以及规模（大公司确实得学会给自己打广告，而小公司大家都比较熟，这样可能适得其反）来进行讨论。千万别觉得这么写立场不够鲜明，我们的立场很明确。那就是坚决不同意。

一边倒+分类讨论

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Two people can be good friends even if one has more money than the other. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 2022-10-12

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这个题其实也不好写，我在带着学生讲这个题的时候经常感到十分痛苦。但是，如果我们能从有钱人和没钱人两个角度来展开的话就会感觉容易很多。

First of all, almost no poor people want to establish friendships with rich ones. With regard to rich people, neither do they intend to establish friendships with people from humble backgrounds.

一旦我们每一段能找到一个具体的情况（有钱人和没钱人），然后抓住相应的分类的群体的特点，我们在展开的时候就会感觉丝滑很多。比如，没钱人我们可以写他们在有钱人面前可能会自卑；而有钱人呢可能会觉得跟没钱人在一起没有啥共同语言，还担心别人向自己求助。

让步转折分类讨论

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Many people nowadays spend too much money on their pets (dogs, cats, or other animals), although there are better uses for this money. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 2022-10-02

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这个题感觉并没有那么难写，即使用传统的一边倒的写法，我们可能也能找到一些思路。比如，我们可以写人们不应该把钱花在宠物上，而应该花在其他任意两个方面，比如教育和医疗。但是，如果我们能够换一个角度，采用具体情况具体分析的写法就会显得更加容易。在满分范文当中，主题句是这样写的：

I have to admit that young people really should not spend too much money on pets. However, once we consider the elderly, I don't think we can blame them for spending too much money on their pets.

这种写法的好处就是我们可以把大部分的篇幅都用来写年轻人和老年人的特点。年轻人生活压力大，而应该把钱攒下来应对将来的金钱需求，而年龄比较大的人退休之后生活压力很小，他们却很孤单，所以他们需要养宠物来缓解孤独。更主要的是一旦年轻人和老年人的特点我们掌握了之后，可以套用到很多其他类似的题目当中去，从而做到举一反三。

• 如何学习这30篇满分范文？

学习满分范文最好的方式就是把范文仿写下来，所以我在考试先生的网站上将满分范文做成范文包并且把仿写的功能结合进来。大家可以用自己的手机号登录之后十分方便的对范文进行仿写。我们既可以逐句逐段、也可以全篇仿写。在得到系统的反馈之后，我们可以及时改正自己的错误，一直到整篇范文都可以仿写到90%以上的准确率。不一定每个同学都需要把30篇范文仿写下来。对大部分同学来说仿写15篇左右范文应该就可以写出非常不错的文章。实际上一旦每一个题型和话题我们都仿写一篇之后，我们就不会再有任何文章最初提到的那些问题，因为满分范文见多了，我们自然就知道什么样的文章可以拿到满分，也就十分清楚自己该怎么练习了。

30篇范文对应的题目以及考察日期汇总如下：

日期	题目
2022-11-07-2	Because the use of technology such as computers in classrooms for young students (ages 6-12) has led to many improvements in learning, some people hold the view that there should be no limit on the number of hours that young students spend using technology during the school day. Others believe that too much time spent using technology during the school day is harmful for young students and that their use of technology should therefore be limited to one hour or less per day. Which view do you support? Why?
2022-11-01-1	You should make sure that others (for example, influential people or potential employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments; if you do not do this, you will never be successful in life.
2022-10-18-1	The most important problems affecting society today will probably be solved during my lifetime.
2022-10-17-1	It is more important for governments to spend money to support art museums and music performances than to support recreational facilities (for example, playgrounds and public swimming pools).
2022-10-12-1	Two people can be good friends even if one has more money than the other.
2022-10-11-1	Imagine that your company has decided to open offices in two new locations. One new office will be in a city inside your country, and the other office will be in a city in a different country. Would you prefer to work in the office inside your country or in the office in a different country? Why?
2022-10-10-1	Students can learn just as much by watching films as they can by reading books.
2022-10-09-1	Sometimes at work or school, you might encounter a problem that requires creativity––for example, when you are given a new task to complete that is very different from other tasks you do. In work or school situations that require you to think creatively, would you prefer to work alone or with others? Why?
2022-10-04-2	Some people believe that it is an important part of a child's education to go on field trips (for example, to museums). Others think that a child's time is better spent learning in a classroom at school. Which view do you agree with?
2022-10-04-1	Many people believe that a university education should focus less on teaching academic courses and more on a practical, job-specific course of study. Which ONE of the following approaches would best help universities to achieve this goal? Why? -- Universities should require each student to complete an internship (training) program in his or her chosen field to develop the skills needed in the workplace. -- Universities should only offer majors or specializations for which there is a known current or projected need in the market.
2022-10-03-1	Some charitable organizations (groups that help people in need) allow people who give money to charity to choose how their donations will be used. (For example, people can decide whether their donated money is spent directly on goods and services for people in need or on advertising by the charity.) If you were to give money to charity, would you prefer to choose how your donation is going to be used, or do you think it is more effective to leave that decision to the organization? Why?
2022-10-02-1	Many people nowadays spend too much money on their pets (dogs, cats, or other animals), although there are better uses for this money.
2022-09-25-1	In times of economic crisis, governments often reduce the money they spend in some areas. Of the three choices listed below, if a government is facing economic problems, which one or which ones should the government spend less money on? --Arts --Scientific research --Parks and public gardens
2022-09-20-1	lmagine that you are trying to find a new job in a field that interests you. When looking for the job, you might use the following strategies. --Asking as many friends as possible, both in person and on social media, to let you know if they know about a job opening --Sending letters introducing yourself and expressing your job interests to any company that you would like to work for --Looking for job advertisements posted by companies online or placed by companies in publications such as newspapers Which ONE of these methods do you think would be most likely to bring you success in finding a job? Why?
2022-09-13-2	Imagine you have two friends who deal with problems in very different ways. One of your friends believes that laughter and taking things lightly (not too seriously) is the best way to find a solution for most problems. Your other friend believes that it is better to be serious and not take things lightly, even when dealing with very small problems. Which approach do you prefer? Why?
2022-09-05-1	The reading that a student does on his or her own is as important as, or more important than, the reading that a student does because it is assigned by teachers.
2022-09-04-1	Celebrities such as actors, musicians, and athletes sometimes express their political views publicly. Some people appreciate knowing the political views of their favorite celebrities, while others believe it is not appropriate or useful to know the political views of celebrities. Which view do you agree with? Why?
2022-08-22-1	When students study these days, many of them also do other things at the same time, for example, use their phones, spend time on the Internet, or listen to music. Do you agree or disagree that such activities have a bad effect on learning?
2022-08-21-1	The only effective way for governments to encourage energy conservation is to increase the price of gasoline and electricity.
2022-07-31-1	A school has been providing funding for students to participate in three types of after-school activities. Next year the school will only have enough money to continue one of these activities. Which one activity should be continued, and why? –sports –art –volunteering (for example, helping improve the community) Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.
2022-07-03-1	Children should spend most of their time playing or studying; they should not be required to help their family with household chores, such as cleaning or cooking,
2022-06-22-1	Most people can solve important problems in their lives by themselves or with the help of their families; help from the government is often unnecessary.
2022-06-12-1	Children these days are often required to spend most of their time outside of school hours doing homework and participating in organized activities related to school or sports; however, children need to be given more time to do whatever they choose to do.
2022-05-22-1	Some parents today closely monitor their children's use of technology. For example, they might read the text messages that their children send to their friends with their phones. Parents feel that they are protecting their children by taking these measures, but some argue that they are violating their children's right to privacy. Where do you stand on this issue? Should parents be closely watching their children's online activity?
2022-05-01-1	University students often live together with other students, sharing the cost of housing. If you attended university in another country (one that is not your own), would you prefer to live together with students who come from your own country, or would you choose to live with students who come from countries other than your own? Why?
2022-04-27-2	Patience is usually not a good strategy; we should take action now rather than later.
2022-03-23-2	Which one of the following values is most important to share with a young child (ages 5 to 10)? Why? -Being helpful to others -Being honest -Being well organized
2022-03-06-2	Some parents enjoy giving their children weekly spending money; for example, they may give their primary (elementary) or middle school child a small amount of money each week to spend on whatever the child wants. Some people believe that this practice can cause children to develop bad habits or ideas about money and that parents should not give their children weekly spending money. Do you think it is a good thing or a bad thing for parents to give their children weekly spending money? Why?
2022-01-25-1	Parents should let their children make and learn from their own mistakes.
2022-01-03-1	Younger school children (ages five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science, and history.